Showing posts with label revision strategies. Show all posts
Showing posts with label revision strategies. Show all posts

10/20/09 - 10/26/09

Week Focus:

Prewriting Ideas -- gathering, writing, organizing, revising for draft
Drafting and Revising-- ARMS: Add, Remove, Move, Substitute
Goal: Prewrite in web, list, or free-write, then re-read and number to organize your ideas before drafting; timeline; graphic organizer;
Goal: Fluency
Goal: poetry: Where I’m From
Figurative Language -- revision strategies (ARMS)

http://whatelse.pbworks.com/Where-Im-From
http://whatelse.pbworks.com/Revision

Writing Process Evaluation


Tues 10/20
ARMS Review
Where I’m From revision and final draft

Wed 10/21
Power Writing

1.Re-read and choose a power writing you have already completed.
2. Prewrite more ideas on that topic.
3. Decide if it will be paragraphs (fact or nonfiction) or poetry.
4. Decide who would like to read it later.
5. Organize. Use highlighters to highlight the best parts of your prewriting. Number them in the order that makes sense for your reader.
6. Draft. (double space; do not write on back)

Workshop: Use your ARMS to revise your draft.
Add, Remove, Move, Substitute


Thurs 10/22
ARMS: Revise your draft. Write your strategy in the margins and underline your revision.
Review requirements and what students have done
Cover letter and example



Fri 10/23
Sub Day


Monday 10/26
Power Write
Write Source
Art for drafts




EALR 1: The student understands and uses a writing process.
Component 1.2: Produces draft(s). W
Component 1.3: Revises to improve text. W
Component 1.4: Edits text. W

EALR 3: The student writes clearly and effectively.
Component 3.1: Develops ideas and organizes writing. W

3.1.1 Analyzes ideas, selects a narrow topic, and elaborates using specific details and/or examples.

3.2.2 Analyzes and selects language appropriate for specific audiences and purposes.
Component 3.3: Knows and
applies appropriate grade level writing conventions. W

10/14/09 - 10/19/09

Week Focus:

Prewriting Ideas -- gathering, writing, organizing, revising for draft
Drafting and Revising-- ARMS: Add, Remove, Move, Substitute
Goal: Prewrite in web, list, or free-write, then re-read and number to organize your ideas before drafting; timeline; graphic organizer;
Goal: Fluency
Goal: poetry: Where I’m From
Figurative Language -- revision strategies (ARMS)

http://whatelse.pbworks.com/Where-Im-From
http://whatelse.pbworks.com/Revision

Writing Process Evaluation


Wed 10/14
Power Writing
Organize folders/Table of Contents
Writing Process Evaluation
Writing Prompts and Genre

Thurs 10/15

1.Re-read and choose a power writing you have already completed.
2. Prewrite more ideas on that topic.
3. Decide if it will be paragraphs (fact or nonfiction) or poetry.
4. Decide who would like to read it later.
5. Organize. Use highlighters to highlight the best parts of your prewriting. Number them in the order that makes sense for your reader.
6. Draft. (double space; do not write on back)

Workshop: Use your ARMS to revise your draft.
Add, Remove, Move, Substitute

Fri 10/16
ARMS: Revise your draft. Write your strategy in the margins and underline your revision.
Workshop


Mon 10/19
Power Write
Review requirements and what students have done
Cover letter and example




EALR 1: The student understands and uses a writing process.
Component 1.2: Produces draft(s). W
Component 1.3: Revises to improve text. W
Component 1.4: Edits text. W

EALR 3: The student writes clearly and effectively.
Component 3.1: Develops ideas and organizes writing. W
3.2.2 Analyzes and selects language appropriate for specific audiences and purposes.
Component 3.3: Knows and
applies appropriate grade level writing conventions. W

10/6/09 - 10/13/09

Week Focus:

Prewriting Ideas -- gathering, writing, organizing, revising for draft
Drafting and Revising-- ARMS: Add, Remove, Move, Substitute
Goal: Prewrite in web, list, or free-write, then re-read and number to organize your ideas before drafting; timeline; graphic organizer;
Goal: Fluency
Goal: poetry: Where I’m From
Figurative Language -- revision strategies (ARMS)

http://whatelse.pbworks.com/Where-Im-From
http://whatelse.pbworks.com/Revision


Mon 10/5
S: Revision techniques: ARMS 1,2, Add
http://whatelse.pbworks.com/Revision

Tues 10/6
Revise poem; Strategy: ARMS
ARMS: A: ADD 3 to your writing
Add for C:
2 strong verbs *
2 precise nouns !
2 instances of alliteration or consonance ~

Activity Packet: Grammar 1 I

Wed 10/7
Power Write
Nouns page 408
Review: prepositional phrases --look for in poem
Own writing and conferences


Thurs 10/8
Revise poem; Strategy: ARMS
ARMS: R: Remove
Add, Remove in your own poem.
Genre Writing Prompts

Friday 10/9
Goal and Reflections -- cover letter
Revise poem; Strategy: ARMS
ARMS: M: Move -- Move in your poem
Vocabulary
Prewrite
Draft
Revision
Prepositional phrase


Mon 10/12 No School Tues 10/13

Revise poem; Strategy: ARMS
ARMS: S: Substitute

Add, Remove, Move, Substitute in own poem

Stars and Wishes





EALR 1: The student understands and uses a writing process.
Component 1.2: Produces draft(s). W
Component 1.3: Revises to improve text. W
Component 1.4: Edits text. W

EALR 3: The student writes clearly and effectively.
Component 3.1: Develops ideas and organizes writing. W
3.2.2 Analyzes and selects language appropriate for specific audiences and purposes.
Component 3.3: Knows and
applies appropriate grade level writing conventions. W

9/28/09-10/5/09

Week Focus:

Prewriting Ideas -- gathering, writing, organizing, revising for draft
Drafting and Revising-- ARMS: Add, Remove, Move, Substitute
Goal: Prewrite in web, list, or free-write, then re-read and number to organize your ideas before drafting; timeline; graphic organizer;
Goal: Fluency
Goal: poetry: Where I’m From
Figurative Language -- revision strategies (ARMS)

http://whatelse.pbworks.com/Where-Im-From
http://whatelse.pbworks.com/Revision


Tues 9/29
Notebook, Folder, CSI checklists -- goals
Table of Contents

Strengthen:
Where I’m From
Prewrite Strategies review: Freewrite, web, list, graphic organizer,
Introduce: timeline

Wed 9/30
S:
Poetic Form: phrases -- short lines
Drafting Strategies: Organize notes from prewrite -- number/color/start in middle

Thursday 10/1
S: Stars and Wishes -- peer sharing


Fri 10/2
Writing Strategy:

Draw then write: Create an image of memories for a person important to you, then write about it for that person



Mon 10/5
S: Revision techniques: ARMS--Add, Remove, Move, Substitute parts 1,2
http://whatelse.pbworks.com/Revision



EALR 1: The student understands and uses a writing process.
Component 1.2: Produces draft(s). W
Component 1.3: Revises to improve text. W
Component 1.4: Edits text. W

EALR 3: The student writes clearly and effectively.
Component 3.1: Develops ideas and organizes writing. W
3.2.2 Analyzes and selects language appropriate for specific audiences and purposes.
Component 3.3: Knows and
applies appropriate grade level writing conventions. W

February 18 - March 2

Resources
Review figurative language
https://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Figurative-Language

Third Quarter Requirements
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Writing-Requirements
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Genre-Expectations
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Revision-Tips-2
http://eagleviews.pbwiki.com/The-News-Project

Presentation
http://nespelem.org/whatelse/


Wednesday 2/18
C = Genre --
S = Revision Strategies
I = Genre work for blog

Thursday 2/19
At Eagle Festival-- no writing class

Friday 2/20
Assembly

Monday 2/23
Sub:
Grammar: Punctuation of sentences; dialogue

Tuesday 2/24
C = Genre -- Reporting/Newswriting/Blogs
S = News Story-- Reporting/Newswriting/Blogs
http://eagleviews.pbwiki.com/The-News-Project
I = Genre work for blog-- possible stories for groups
Practice interviewing (Where were you born? Where is your favorite place and why? What is the funniest thing that ever happened to you?)

Wednesday 2/25

C = Genre -- Reporting/Newswriting/Blogs
S = Vocabulary-- Reporting/Newswriting/Blogs
I =Practice interviewing

Thursday 2/26
C = Genre -- Reporting/Newswriting/Blogs
S = Newstory -- Reporting/Newswriting/Blogs--pyramid style and paragraphing style
I =Practice interviewing

Friday 2/27

I = Genre work for blog-- Draft interviews
Assembly

Monday 3/2
Review Intervieiwing
Intro: Newstory Fairy Tale; Sign up for stories
What stories do we know about already -- from our own knowledge?




EALR 1: The student understands and uses a writing process. 1.1.1 Applies more than one strategy for generating ideas and planning writing.
· Generates ideas prior to organizing them * Uses a variety of prewriting strategies
1.2.1 Analyzes task and composes multiple drafts when appropriate a. Refers to prewriting plan.
1.4.1 Edits for conventions (see 3.3).
1.3.1 Revises text, including changing words, sentences, paragraphs, and ideas.Rereads work several times and has a different focus for each reading (e.g., first reading — adding transitions; second reading — deleting unnecessary details; third reading — identifying areas where evidence is lacking and adding relevant information). Evaluates and uses feedback (e.g., “I’ll use the word transformation to improve my word choice.”).

3.1.1 Analyzes ideas, selects a manageable topic, and elaborates using specific, relevant details and/or examples.

3.1.2 Analyzes and selects effective organizational structure. -- organize, lead, end, transitions

3.2.1 Applies understanding that different audiences and purposes affect writer’s voice.

2.1.1 Applies understanding of multiple and varied audiences to write effectively.
2.2.1 Demonstrates understanding of different purposes for writing.

February 10 - February 18, 2009

Focus

Eagle Festival Essay/Poetry
https://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Eagle-Contest

Figurative language
https://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Figurative-Language

Genre Project Main Page


Third Quarter Requirements
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Writing-Requirements


Lesson Focus

The student will be able to follow the writing process using the six traits of powerful writing and peer conferences to prewrite, draft, and compose a piece of writing in a variety of genre.

Our Lesson Progress for Mon/Tues is listed at:
https://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Eagle-Contest




Resources

Review figurative language
https://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Figurative-Language

Third Quarter Requirements
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Writing-Requirements
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Genre-Expectations
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Revision-Tips-2

Presentation Possibilities
http://nespelem.org/whatelse/
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com




Monday 2/9 Tuesday 2/10
Finalize story/essay/poems and print
Review figurative language possibilities
Revise, share, finalize, print.

Wednesday 2/11
C = Genre
S = Blog Intro
I = Write on topic

Thursday 2/12
C = Genre
S = Blog Intro -- Prewrite and Draft
I = Write on topic


Friday 2/13
C = Genre
S = Blog Intro -- Prewrite and Draft
I = Write on topic


Monday President’s Day
Tuesday Waiver Day; teacher learning

Wednesday 2/18
C = Genre
S = Revision Strategies
I = Genre work for blog



EALR
1: The student understands and uses a writing process.
1.1.1 Applies more than one strategy for generating ideas and planning writing.
· Generates ideas prior to organizing them * Uses a variety of prewriting strategies

1.2.1 Analyzes task and composes multiple drafts when appropriate a. Refers to prewriting plan.

1.4.1 Edits for conventions (see 3.3).

1.3.1 Revises text, including changing words, sentences, paragraphs, and ideas.Rereads work several times and has a different focus for each reading (e.g., first reading — adding transitions; second reading — deleting unnecessary details; third reading — identifying areas where evidence is lacking and adding relevant information). Evaluates and uses feedback (e.g., “I’ll use the word transformation to improve my word choice.”).

3.1.1 Analyzes ideas, selects a manageable topic, and elaborates using specific, relevant details and/or examples.

3.1.2 Analyzes and selects effective organizational structure. -- organize, lead, end, transitions

3.2.1 Applies understanding that different audiences and purposes affect writer’s voice.

2.1.1 Applies understanding of multiple and varied audiences to write effectively.

2.2.1 Demonstrates understanding of different purposes for writing.