January 26th - February 2, 2009


Focus

Eagle Festival Essay/Poetry
https://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Eagle-Contest

Figurative language
https://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Figurative-Language

Genre Project Main Page





Lesson Focus

The student will be able to follow the writing process using the six traits of powerful writing and peer conferences to prewrite, draft, and compose an essay and a poem on a topic related to the Balde Eagle Festival.

Our Lesson Progress is listed at:
https://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Eagle-Contest

Each activity follows an EALR expectation (below).

Each day I will record the step completed as lesson and any other lessons/activities completed as the need arises. Students still want to work on their choice genre writing, blogs,and voicethreads.


Daily Lesson Log:

Monday 1/26

Prewriting: Oral sharing, Power writing, Peer Questions, Revision, Model Oral/Draft/Final story-telling

Genre: research/notes/ drafting on student choice projects

Tuesday 1/27
CSI Review
Ideas: Observation; memory details; fact/fiction -- invent details you have forgotten so you can paint a picture in the reader's mind.
Ideas: Ideas Intro: What would you write if you were a reporter? What would you write if you were a story-teller? Strategy: 5Ws; Observation


Wednesday 1/28
Eagle Contest Tasks
Review Ideas: Discuss observation, prewriting, gather focused ideas and interesting details
Review Prewriting: Gather observations and details -- Zoom out for the big picture and in for the details; take a snapshot in mind and describe what you see, inventing what you can't quite remember.

Choice time:
Genre: Own writing projects
Write Source Grammar


Monday 2/2
Practice with same Idea tree pictures:
Teams: 1a, 2a: What would you write if you were a reporter?
Teams 1b, 2b: What would you write if you were a story-teller?

What will be your message? and purpose (reporter - inform; story - entertain)

Did you:
Reporter--
Zoom out for big picture?
Zoom in for details? (snapshot?)
Include 5Ws?
Main idea first?
Supporting details?

Did you:
Story teller:
Set up story -- describe setting?
Describe characters?
Show, not tell action (action verbs)?
Beginning, Middle, Ending?
End with message for reader?




Tuesday 2/3

1. Zoom in/out; details
2. List as many 5Ws as you can: who, what, when, where, why
3. Write a twenty-word gist statement -- what is the main idea/message?
4. Describe what the creature in your story looks and sounds like; acts like

Keep in mind your message and purpose.


Review strategies: zoom, snapshot, 5Ws, gists, looks/sounds/acts




EALR
1: The student understands and uses a writing process.
1.1.1 Applies more than one strategy for generating ideas and planning writing.
· Generates ideas prior to organizing them * Uses a variety of prewriting strategies

1.2.1 Analyzes task and composes multiple drafts when appropriate a. Refers to prewriting plan.

1.4.1 Edits for conventions (see 3.3).

1.3.1 Revises text, including changing words, sentences, paragraphs, and ideas.Rereads work several times and has a different focus for each reading (e.g., first reading — adding transitions; second reading — deleting unnecessary details; third reading — identifying areas where evidence is lacking and adding relevant information). Evaluates and uses feedback (e.g., “I’ll use the word transformation to improve my word choice.”).

3.1.1 Analyzes ideas, selects a manageable topic, and elaborates using specific, relevant details and/or examples.

3.1.2 Analyzes and selects effective organizational structure. -- organize, lead, end, transitions

3.2.1 Applies understanding that different audiences and purposes affect writer’s voice.

2.1.1 Applies understanding of multiple and varied audiences to write effectively.

2.2.1 Demonstrates understanding of different purposes for writing.



January 20 - January 26

Capture: Set daily goals and reflect
Strength: Practice daily lesson skill
Interact: with words/peers/teacher
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/CSI-Schedule

Making changes: resolutions and blogs
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Making-Changes
GENRE: http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Genre-Expectations

http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Ideas-Intro

Figurative language
https://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Figurative-Language


Inauguration
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/For-The-People




Monday 1/19 MLK Day
Tuesday 1/20 Inauguration Day
Resolution Report and Follow up

Inauguration Activities
Intro to Eagle contest

Wednesday 1/21
Inauguration Reading, Responding, Vocabulary, Writing

Thursday
WASL Practice: Expository Prompt Review and feedback

Circle best part so far. Revise for strategies learned: Names, Verbs, Action, Details, Clutter, Figurative Language
Turn in

Friday
Inauguration lessons
Voice Thread to President Obama: We can...

Monday, 1/26
Ideas: Trees --- Eagle contest
Genre Work, if time.

Six Trait Activity: Gist Statements --Eagle contest
Genre Practice and share

Tuesday
Six Trait Activity: Gist Statements --Eagle contest
Genre Practice and share



EALR 1: The student understands and uses a writing process. 1.1.1 Applies more than one strategy for generating ideas and planning writing.
· Generates ideas prior to organizing them * Uses a variety of prewriting strategies
1.2.1 Analyzes task and composes multiple drafts when appropriate a. Refers to prewriting plan.
1.4.1 Edits for conventions (see 3.3).
1.3.1 Revises text, including changing words, sentences, paragraphs, and ideas.Rereads work several times and has a different focus for each reading (e.g., first reading — adding transitions; second reading — deleting unnecessary details; third reading — identifying areas where evidence is lacking and adding relevant information). Evaluates and uses feedback (e.g., “I’ll use the word transformation to improve my word choice.”).

3.1.1 Analyzes ideas, selects a manageable topic, and elaborates using specific, relevant details and/or examples.

3.1.2 Analyzes and selects effective organizational structure. -- organize, lead, end, transitions

3.2.1 Applies understanding that different audiences and purposes affect writer’s voice.

2.1.1 Applies understanding of multiple and varied audiences to write effectively.
2.2.1 Demonstrates understanding of different purposes for writing.

January 13th - January 20th, 2009


Focus

Word Choice Lesson: Eliminate Dead Verbs --http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Dead-Verbs
Focus: Writing Notebooks -Lessons: Table of Contents/
L12 Simple to Complex

Capture: Set daily goals and reflect
Strength: Practice daily lesson skill
Interact: with words/peers/teacher
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/CSI-Schedule

Making changes: resolutions and blogs
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Making-Changes

GENRE: http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Genre-Expectations

http://spreadsheets.google.com/pub?key=phjMpIkPupK9cF5d46dF3Fw

http://spreadsheets.google.com/pub?key=phjMpIkPupK8JBcco0TlrRg



Tuesday 1/13
Resolution : Changes We Make: 1 Day


Wednesday 1/14
WASL Practice: Expository Prompt

Thursday 1/15
Resolution: MLK Day
WASL finish, if needed;


Friday 1/16

Assembly

Monday 1/19 MLK Day
Tuesday 1/20 Inauguration Day
Resolution Report and Follow up
Inauguration Activities




EALR

EALR 1: The student understands and uses a writing process. 1.1.1 Applies more than one strategy for generating ideas and planning writing.
· Generates ideas prior to organizing them * Uses a variety of prewriting strategies
1.2.1 Analyzes task and composes multiple drafts when appropriate a. Refers to prewriting plan.
1.4.1 Edits for conventions (see 3.3).
1.3.1 Revises text, including changing words, sentences, paragraphs, and ideas.Rereads work several times and has a different focus for each reading (e.g., first reading — adding transitions; second reading — deleting unnecessary details; third reading — identifying areas where evidence is lacking and adding relevant information). Evaluates and uses feedback (e.g., “I’ll use the word transformation to improve my word choice.”).

3.1.1 Analyzes ideas, selects a manageable topic, and elaborates using specific, relevant details and/or examples.

3.1.2 Analyzes and selects effective organizational structure. -- organize, lead, end, transitions

3.2.1 Applies understanding that different audiences and purposes affect writer’s voice.

2.1.1 Applies understanding of multiple and varied audiences to write effectively.
2.2.1 Demonstrates understanding of different purposes for writing.

January 5th - January 12th

Focus:

Word Choice
Lesson Daily: Eliminate Dead Verbs --http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Dead-Verbs

Writing Notebooks -- Lessons: Table of Contents/
L 12 Simple to Complex

CSI:
Capture: Set daily goals and reflect
Strength: Practice daily lesson skill
Interact: with words/peers/teacher
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/CSI-Schedule

Making changes
: resolutions
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Making-Changes


GENRE: http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Genre-Expectations




Monday 1/05/09

Power Writing
Sentence Fluency L12 Simple to Complex
Cross-writing from story starter:
Trudging through the thick snow to the top of the hill, ....

Tuesday 1/6/09

Power Writing:
What have you written in class? out of class?
What do you want to write?
What do you think you still need to learn?

Lessons: CSI
Genre Choices and discussion

Genre/Write

Wednesday 1/7/09

Capture
Strengthen: Genre/Resolutions -- Making changes Quotes
Interact -- confer
Reflect

Thursday 1/8

Genre Discussion; Resolution -- video
Group Discuss with plan to turn in

Friday 1/9

Genre Discussion; Resolution -- Making changes Changes We Know
Group Discuss with plan to turn in

Monday 1/12


Making changes Resolutions - Changes We Want
Complex Sentences
Genre Work/Conferences




EALR 1: The student understands and uses a writing process. 1.1.1 Applies more than one strategy for generating ideas and planning writing.
· Generates ideas prior to organizing them * Uses a variety of prewriting strategies
1.2.1 Analyzes task and composes multiple drafts when appropriate a. Refers to prewriting plan.
1.4.1 Edits for conventions (see 3.3).
1.3.1 Revises text, including changing words, sentences, paragraphs, and ideas.Rereads work several times and has a different focus for each reading (e.g., first reading — adding transitions; second reading — deleting unnecessary details; third reading — identifying areas where evidence is lacking and adding relevant information). Evaluates and uses feedback (e.g., “I’ll use the word transformation to improve my word choice.”).

3.1.1 Analyzes ideas, selects a manageable topic, and elaborates using specific, relevant details and/or examples.

3.1.2 Analyzes and selects effective organizational structure. -- organize, lead, end, transitions

3.2.1 Applies understanding that different audiences and purposes affect writer’s voice.

2.1.1 Applies understanding of multiple and varied audiences to write effectively.
2.2.1 Demonstrates understanding of different purposes for writing.