Showing posts with label 5Ws. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 5Ws. Show all posts

April 28 - May 4

Focus:
Capture: Set daily goals and reflect
Strength: Practice daily lesson skill
Interact: with words/peers/teacher
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/CSI-Schedule

Fourth Quarter Requirements
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Genre-Expectations
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Revision-Tips-2
http://eagleviews.pbwiki.com/The-News-Project

http://eagleviews.pbwiki.com/Story-Log

http://eagleviews.pbwiki.com/Grade-6-Writers

http://eagleviews.pbwiki.com


Six Traits:
Ideas -- prewriting
Ideas -- draft
Organization --paragraphs, beginnings, endings - find in your paper
Organization and Word Choice --Names/Verbs/Emotion -- see revision tips
Sentence Fluency -- Length/Structure
Voice -- attitude appropriate for audience and purpose
Edit -- punctuation/spelling/ grammar, etc.

Resources:

The News Project

Choosing a Story

News Story Questions

Story Planning

Story Options

Interview Tips

Story Log

Reporter Lesson Log

Interview Tips

Review figurative language

Links

Presentation
Eagle Views News Blog




Tuesday 4/28
Grammar -- proofread (read)
Project Work; confer with teacher

Wednesday 4/29 (may be root digging)
Read and discuss requirements ---
Grammar -- proofread (discuss and apply)
Focus -- leads and leads

Thursday 4/30

Focus -- Inverted pyramid -- lead/5ws/facts

Grammar -- punctuation (read)
Focus -- leads

Friday 5/1
Town Clean up

Monday 5/4
Grammar -- punctuation (discuss and apply)
Focus -- Share leads/team reviews





Tasks

Sign up for stories. Write/Type Questions (neat); Start appointments

Wiki work on drafts (see story options and story planning-- in resources above)

Share and comment --- feedback teacher and peers on stories

Teams (writers, designers, editors, graphics, proofreader) for proofreading/revising formed.

Confer with teacher for individual lessons on: leads, headlines, pyramid, 5ws, questioning, interview review, passes, strong verbs --- document on CSI sheet


Think and write:

What is your story?
Who will you interview?
What are your questions?
Write how you will ask them to be interviewed.






EALR

1: The student understands and uses a writing process. 1.1.1 Applies more than one strategy for generating ideas and planning writing.
· Generates ideas prior to organizing them * Uses a variety of prewriting strategies
1.2.1 Analyzes task and composes multiple drafts when appropriate a. Refers to prewriting plan.
1.4.1 Edits for conventions (see 3.3).
1.3.1 Revises text, including changing words, sentences, paragraphs, and ideas.Rereads work several times and has a different focus for each reading (e.g., first reading — adding transitions; second reading — deleting unnecessary details; third reading — identifying areas where evidence is lacking and adding relevant information). Evaluates and uses feedback (e.g., “I’ll use the word transformation to improve my word choice.”).

3.1.1 Analyzes ideas, selects a manageable topic, and elaborates using specific, relevant details and/or examples.

3.1.2 Analyzes and selects effective organizational structure. -- organize, lead, end, transitions

3.2.1 Applies understanding that different audiences and purposes affect writer’s voice.

2.1.1 Applies understanding of multiple and varied audiences to write effectively.
2.2.1 Demonstrates understanding of different purposes for writing.



March 2 - March 9

Resources
Review figurative language
https://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Figurative-Language

Third Quarter Requirements
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Writing-Requirements
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Genre-Expectations
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Revision-Tips-2
http://eagleviews.pbwiki.com/The-News-Project

Presentation
http://nespelem.org/whatelse/

Thursday 2/26
C = Genre -- Reporting/Newswriting/Blogs
S = Newstory -- Reporting/Newswriting/Blogs--pyramid style and paragraphing style
I = Practice interviewing and drafting

Friday 2/27

I = Genre work for blog-- Draft interviews
Assembly

Monday 3/2
Review interviewing
Intro: pyramid 1 --- look at newspapers -- 5Ws
Ice Cream

Tuesday 3/3
Review interviewing
Intro: pyramid 1 --- look at newspapers -- 5Ws -- Feature Stories
Interviews to pyramid style

Wednesday 3/4
Intro: Newstory Fairy Tale -- pyramid style



Thursday 3/5
HANDS Project: message, design, lettering


Friday 3/6
Interviews to pyramid style -- 5Ws in first 3-4 sentences.
Finish HANDS project

Monday 3/9
What makes a news story? WS 169. Choose stories/logs/prepare.
Interviews to pyramid style
What stories do we know about already -- from our own knowledge?
What makes a news story? WS 169 Add to wiki.
Sign up for stories
Choose stories -- logs/set up
Practice stories for EAGLE traits. 5Ws Interview each other. Draft with Pyramid.




EALR

1: The student understands and uses a writing process. 1.1.1 Applies more than one strategy for generating ideas and planning writing.
· Generates ideas prior to organizing them * Uses a variety of prewriting strategies
1.2.1 Analyzes task and composes multiple drafts when appropriate a. Refers to prewriting plan.
1.4.1 Edits for conventions (see 3.3).
1.3.1 Revises text, including changing words, sentences, paragraphs, and ideas.Rereads work several times and has a different focus for each reading (e.g., first reading — adding transitions; second reading — deleting unnecessary details; third reading — identifying areas where evidence is lacking and adding relevant information). Evaluates and uses feedback (e.g., “I’ll use the word transformation to improve my word choice.”).

3.1.1 Analyzes ideas, selects a manageable topic, and elaborates using specific, relevant details and/or examples.

3.1.2 Analyzes and selects effective organizational structure. -- organize, lead, end, transitions

3.2.1 Applies understanding that different audiences and purposes affect writer’s voice.

2.1.1 Applies understanding of multiple and varied audiences to write effectively.
2.2.1 Demonstrates understanding of different purposes for writing.

February 18 - March 2

Resources
Review figurative language
https://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Figurative-Language

Third Quarter Requirements
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Writing-Requirements
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Genre-Expectations
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Revision-Tips-2
http://eagleviews.pbwiki.com/The-News-Project

Presentation
http://nespelem.org/whatelse/


Wednesday 2/18
C = Genre --
S = Revision Strategies
I = Genre work for blog

Thursday 2/19
At Eagle Festival-- no writing class

Friday 2/20
Assembly

Monday 2/23
Sub:
Grammar: Punctuation of sentences; dialogue

Tuesday 2/24
C = Genre -- Reporting/Newswriting/Blogs
S = News Story-- Reporting/Newswriting/Blogs
http://eagleviews.pbwiki.com/The-News-Project
I = Genre work for blog-- possible stories for groups
Practice interviewing (Where were you born? Where is your favorite place and why? What is the funniest thing that ever happened to you?)

Wednesday 2/25

C = Genre -- Reporting/Newswriting/Blogs
S = Vocabulary-- Reporting/Newswriting/Blogs
I =Practice interviewing

Thursday 2/26
C = Genre -- Reporting/Newswriting/Blogs
S = Newstory -- Reporting/Newswriting/Blogs--pyramid style and paragraphing style
I =Practice interviewing

Friday 2/27

I = Genre work for blog-- Draft interviews
Assembly

Monday 3/2
Review Intervieiwing
Intro: Newstory Fairy Tale; Sign up for stories
What stories do we know about already -- from our own knowledge?




EALR 1: The student understands and uses a writing process. 1.1.1 Applies more than one strategy for generating ideas and planning writing.
· Generates ideas prior to organizing them * Uses a variety of prewriting strategies
1.2.1 Analyzes task and composes multiple drafts when appropriate a. Refers to prewriting plan.
1.4.1 Edits for conventions (see 3.3).
1.3.1 Revises text, including changing words, sentences, paragraphs, and ideas.Rereads work several times and has a different focus for each reading (e.g., first reading — adding transitions; second reading — deleting unnecessary details; third reading — identifying areas where evidence is lacking and adding relevant information). Evaluates and uses feedback (e.g., “I’ll use the word transformation to improve my word choice.”).

3.1.1 Analyzes ideas, selects a manageable topic, and elaborates using specific, relevant details and/or examples.

3.1.2 Analyzes and selects effective organizational structure. -- organize, lead, end, transitions

3.2.1 Applies understanding that different audiences and purposes affect writer’s voice.

2.1.1 Applies understanding of multiple and varied audiences to write effectively.
2.2.1 Demonstrates understanding of different purposes for writing.

9/24 Elaboration with a Question

9/24

Entry: Spelling Homework due. Describe the picture provided.



Australia’s largest butterfly, the birdwing (Ornithoptera priamus) blends into a green leaf. Female birdwings can have a wingspan of nearly 8 inches (20 centimeters).
Photograph by Nicole Duplaix


From: http://old-packerpedia.wiki.packer.edu/Bio+Ulysses+Butterfly

Ulysses Butterfly (papilio ulysses)
by Nick Foretek

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Model Review: Asking questions of draft (draft on board). Discuss how questions helped to add detail/elaboration.

Apply--Rollar Skating paragraph: Write questions with neighbor. Share. Rewrite paragraph with partner.

Ask questions related to the 5Es and 5Ws if you get stuck.

5Es
elaboration: What else? What's another idea?
example: What is an example?
explanation: Could you explain what this is? what happened?
evidence: Where's the proof?
experience: Can you add a story or experience?

5W +H
who, what, when, where, why, how

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Who will share and allow us to practice using the "Question Asking Strategy?"


What questions do you think were asked? What else did each add? What else could each add? Was the piece elaborated? How do you know? What else could b asked? added? deleted?
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Elaborate! Elaborate!

Dance to the music!
Tuesday 9/23

Entry:
1) Choose your five (5) spelling words for this week from your Personal Spelling List in your Spelling Folder. Write them in the first column on your "Weekly Word Study Sheet." Keep it out for me to check while you complete the next activity.

2) Write about one of the "Xs" in your "Writing Treasure Map" Be Specfic -- Elaborate detail to detail and another detail. Keep focused on that one X -- nothing else. Just keep adding elaboration, examples, explanations, evidence, experiences (5Es) and who, what, when, where, why, how (5W +H).

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Spelling homework due tomorrow (no school Thursday or Friday).

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Model: Asking questions of draft (draft on board). Discuss how helped to add detail/elaboration.

Apply:
Read your story to a neighbor. Neighbor follows along.
After the first reading, slowly read it again and your neighbor will ask you questions.
Write the questions in the margins if they help you to add details to your story.

5Es
elaboration: What else? What's another idea?
example: What is an example?
explanation: Could you explain what this is? what happened?
evidence: Where's the proof?
experience: Can you add a story or experience?

5W +H
who, what, when, where, why, how


Who will share and allow us to practice using the "Question Asking Strategy?"

Finish. Share tomorrow.
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