01/26/10 - 02/08/10

Week Focus:
Math Writing
Essay Introductions and research

TweenTribune News and Blog

Awards Project

Directions
Essay Outline:
1 and 2 Expository 
 Compare/Contrast Essay 
Award Nomination Essay


Prewriting Ideas -- gathering, writing, organizing, revising for draft
Drafting and Revising-- ARMS: Add, Remove, Move, Substitute
Goal: Fluency
Figurative Language -- revision strategies (ARMS)
http://whatelse.pbworks.com/Revision



1/26 Power Write--
History or Science Book -- find two interesting people -- notes/paragraph on why chose -- share through commenting

1/27
Math Reading  and Writng: Graphs A
What does a graph mean?--
What do you notice? What are the facts? How do you know? Is the graph fair?
Finish blog/commenting
Choose best comments -- share -- why?
Choose first person --- write all you know.
Awards Project: comparative and persuasive essays
http://spreadsheets.google.com/pub?key=tU-_d4TheEs8N5k8fMB1OKQ&output=html

1/28
Math Reading  and Writing: Graphs B
What does a graph mean?--
What do you notice? What are the facts? How do you know? Is the graph fair?
Tween Tribune Introduction

1/29
Google Docs: Awards Essay
What do you know about our person?
How to create a chart in Google Docs

2/1 Sub Plans
2/2 Sub Plans
2/3 Power Write: Job Shadow Guest Speaker -- Miranda on High School Life Success
Edit practice
2/4 Sub Plans
2/5 Edit practice; Review Google Docs and KWL with class; work period
2/8 Tween Tribune and Diigo Review for note-taking
2/9 Power Write -- Grammar 2



EALR 1: The student understands and uses a writing process.
Component 1.2: Produces draft(s). W
Component 1.3: Revises to improve text. W
1.3.1 Revises text, including changing words, sentences, paragraphs, and ideas.
·       Uses effective revision tools or strategies (e.g., reading draft out loud, checking sentence beginnings, expanding sentences, using an electronic or other thesaurus).
Component 1.4: Edits text. W
Component 3.3: Knows and applies appropriate grade level writing conventions. W
2.1.1 Applies understanding of multiple and varied audiences to write effectively.
·       Identifies an intended audience.
·       Identifies and includes information audience needs to know (e.g., defines scientific terms, makes no assumptions about audience’s prior knowledge).
·       Identifies audience’s interest and knowledge of topic to determine emphasis.
·       Anticipates readers’ questions and writes accordingly.
2.2.1 Demonstrates understanding of different purposes for writing.
·       Writes to pursue a personal interest, to explain, or to persuade.
·       Writes to analyze informational and literary texts (e.g., explains the results of a character’s actions; explains the steps in a scientific investigation).
EALR 3: The student writes clearly and effectively.
Component 3.1: Develops ideas and organizes writing. W
3.1.1 Analyzes ideas, selects a narrow topic, and elaborates using specific details and/or examples.
3.2.2 Analyzes and selects language appropriate for specific audiences and purposes.
·       Selects and uses precise and specialized language in content writing (math language).

01/19/10 - 01/26/10

Gerunds
Infinitives
Prepositional Phrases
Complex Sentences
Transitions

Review Paragraph Structure
http://whatelse.pbworks.com/Thankful








Focus: Sentence Fluency and Strong Verbs
Sentence Fluency




http://write.nsdeagles.org/home/assignments/workshop-expectations/workshop-lessons/sentence-fluency-lessons


Gerunds
Infinitives
Prepositional Phrases
Complex Sentences


1/19 Power Write
Eliminate Dead Verbs


Choose two paragraphs to revise for strong verbs
Revise paragraphs for strong verbs
Revise with ARMS
Work period/conferences with teacher




1/20  and 1/21 Power Write -- Dead Verbs review; revise verbs/ARMS
Work period/conferences with teacher


1/22 Power Write--
Dead Verbs review; revise verbs/ARMS
Stars and Wishes


1/26 Power Write-- History or Science Book -- find two interesting people -- notes/paragraph -- share

1/27
Awards Project: comparative and persuasive essays


Project Assignments: Fluency paragraph and edit; fluency lesson for grade 7; Thankful paragraph and edit; changes project



Awards Project: comparative and persuasive essays



OPTIONS: Internet Safety rules for grades 4 5 6; Life of MLK;




Internet Safety Videos from netsmarz.org
Bus Safety
Walking Safety
Internet Safety-Be Safe
Know Rules
Password
Virus
Instant Message







EALR 1: The student understands and uses a writing process.
Component 1.2: Produces draft(s). W
Component 1.3: Revises to improve text. W
1.3.1 Revises text, including changing words, sentences, paragraphs, and ideas.
· Uses effective revision tools or strategies (e.g., reading draft out loud, checking sentence beginnings, expanding sentences, using an electronic or other thesaurus).

Component 1.4: Edits text. W

EALR 3: The student writes clearly and effectively.
Component 3.1: Develops ideas and organizes writing. W

3.1.1 Analyzes ideas, selects a narrow topic, and elaborates using specific details and/or examples.

3.2.2 Analyzes and selects language appropriate for specific audiences and purposes.

Component 3.3: Knows and
applies appropriate grade level writing conventions. W

01/04/10 - 01/19/10

Gerunds
Infinitives
Prepositional Phrases
Complex Sentences
Transitions

Review Paragraph Structure
http://whatelse.pbworks.com/Thankful






Focus:



Sentence Fluency




Focus: Sentence Fluency and Strong Verbs
Sentence Fluency
http://write.nsdeagles.org/home/assignments/workshop-expectations/workshop-lessons/sentence-fluency-lessons
Gerunds
Infinitives
Prepositional Phrases
Complex Sentences






1/4 Internet Safety;-Write lesson for grade 7 on sentence fluency
1/5 1/6 1/7 Review sentence fluency; internet safety; 
1/8 Root words; possessive nouns; expanding sentences
1/11 Read requirements; Write an Internet Safety summary for grade 4 using sentence fluency strategies; Read MLK
1/12 Changes we can make unit; finish paragraphs, lessons,  and edits




Edit two paragraphs for strong verbs


1/14 changes; Dead Verbs review; finish work
1/15 Stars and Wishes of work  1:30 MLK Assembly
1/19 Awards Project: comparative and persuasive essays




Project Assignments: Fluency paragraph and edit; fluency lesson for grade 7; Thankful paragraph and edit; changes project
OPTIONS: Internet Safety rules for grades 4 5 6; Life of MLK;




Internet Safety Videos from netsmarz.org
Bus Safety
Walking Safety
Internet Safety-Be Safe
Know Rules
Password
Virus
Instant Message







EALR 1: The student understands and uses a writing process.
Component 1.2: Produces draft(s). W
Component 1.3: Revises to improve text. W
1.3.1 Revises text, including changing words, sentences, paragraphs, and ideas.
· Uses effective revision tools or strategies (e.g., reading draft out loud, checking sentence beginnings, expanding sentences, using an electronic or other thesaurus).

Component 1.4: Edits text. W

EALR 3: The student writes clearly and effectively.
Component 3.1: Develops ideas and organizes writing. W

3.1.1 Analyzes ideas, selects a narrow topic, and elaborates using specific details and/or examples.

3.2.2 Analyzes and selects language appropriate for specific audiences and purposes.

Component 3.3: Knows and
applies appropriate grade level writing conventions. W

12/7/09 - 01/04/10

Week Focus:
Goal: Fluency


http://whatelse.pbworks.com/Revision
http://write.nsdeagles.org/home/assignments/workshop-expectations/workshop-lessons/sentence-fluency-lessons


Gerunds
Infinitives
Prepositional Phrases
Complex Sentences
Transitions

Review Paragraph Structure
http://whatelse.pbworks.com/Thankful


Writing Process Evaluation






Focus:



Sentence Fluency




Focus: Sentence Fluency and Strong Verbs
Sentence Fluency
http://write.nsdeagles.org/home/assignments/workshop-expectations/workshop-lessons/sentence-fluency-lessons
Gerunds
Infinitives
Prepositional Phrases
Complex Sentences
Transitions

12/7
Review paragraph structure and sentence fluency; type both paragraphs

12/8
Share paragraphs/Revise --- Use Rubric
Final revision and Publish

12/9 12/10
Music Practice    Net Grammar

12/11
Spelling     Music Practice

12/14
Spelling    Music Practice

12/15
Music Practice  Spelling

12/16
Gift of Magi Play

12/17  and 18 Early Dismissal

1/04
Power Write

1/5
Review Sentence Fluency
Create a lesson for Grade 7 students to use sentence
fluency.  How would you help them learn?

Future:
Eliminate Dead Verbs
http://docs.google.com/View?id=dg9d35kb_255crvw7dcm

Paragraph Assignments







Eliminate Dead Verbs


Upcoming Lessons: Eliminate Dead Verbs











EALR 1: The student understands and uses a writing process.
Component 1.2: Produces draft(s). W
Component 1.3: Revises to improve text. W
1.3.1 Revises text, including changing words, sentences, paragraphs, and ideas.
· Uses effective revision tools or strategies (e.g., reading draft out loud, checking sentence beginnings, expanding sentences, using an electronic or other thesaurus).

Component 1.4: Edits text. W

EALR 3: The student writes clearly and effectively.
Component 3.1: Develops ideas and organizes writing. W

3.1.1 Analyzes ideas, selects a narrow topic, and elaborates using specific details and/or examples.

3.2.2 Analyzes and selects language appropriate for specific audiences and purposes.

Component 3.3: Knows and
applies appropriate grade level writing conventions. W