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May 18 - May 26

Fourth Quarter Requirements
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Genre-Expectations
http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Revision-Tips-2
http://eagleviews.pbwiki.com/The-News-Project
http://whatelse.pbworks.com/W-Requirements
http://whatelse.pbworks.com/Wednesday-Writing-Reflections
http://eagleviews.pbworks.com/Easy-Essays

http://eagleviews.pbwiki.com/Story-Log

http://eagleviews.pbwiki.com/Grade-6-Writers
Lead; Lead Examples and Rules

http://eagleviews.pbwiki.com


Six Traits:
Ideas -- prewriting
Ideas -- draft
Organization --paragraphs, beginnings, endings - find in your paper
Organization and Word Choice --Names/Verbs/Emotion -- see revision tips
Sentence Fluency -- Length/Structure
Voice -- attitude appropriate for audience and purpose
Edit -- punctuation/spelling/ grammar, etc.



End of Year Assignments:

Essays from Junior Scholastic and Science World.

Day 1: Read article. Take notes-- main idea/details -- own experience; own or text example; suggestion for solution or future; Gist Statement

Day 2: Draft --Thesis (Gist Statement)
Three Ideas explaining gist statement with three details each, each in a paragraph -- using transitions between and in paragraphs:
Topic sentence (no because)
1. Idea
a. idea to explain.
b. idea example/experience
c. idea suggestion/example/experience
Concluding Sentence

Day 3: Final Draft -- Paragraphs/transitions --
1-Gist/Thesis
2-Idea 1
3-Idea 2
4-Idea 3
5- Conclusion -- Gist and Suggestion/Question


Tuesday 5/19
Strong Verbs
Write news story

Wednesday 5/20 WASL WED TEST

Thursday 5/21
Checklist:
First 30 words: Lead/Verb What/where/When
Who
Details
Kicker (quote or question)

Friday 5/22
Sunflower Festival

Monday 5/25 Holiday
Tuesday 5/26
Essay focus Day 1: Notes

Six Traits:
Ideas -- prewriting
Ideas -- draft
Organization --paragraphs, beginnings, endings - find in your paper
Organization and Word Choice --Names/Verbs/Emotion -- see revision tips
Sentence Fluency -- Length/Structure
Voice -- attitude appropriate for audience and purpose
Edit -- punctuation/spelling/ grammar, etc.

Essays from Junior Scholastic and Science World.

Day 1: Read article.
Take notes--
main idea/details --
own experience;
own or text example;
suggestion for solution or future;
Gist Statement

Day 2: Draft --Thesis (Gist Statement)
Three Ideas explaining gist statement with three details each, each in a paragraph -- using transitions between and in paragraphs:

Three paragraphs with transitions in this format:
Topic sentence (no because)
1. Idea
a. idea to explain.
b. idea example/experience
c. idea suggestion/example/experience
Concluding Sentence

Day 3: Final Draft -- Paragraphs/transitions --5 paragraphs
1-Gist/Thesis
2-Idea 1
3-Idea 2
4-Idea 3
5- Conclusion -- Gist and Suggestion/Question


Resources for News Writing:

The News Project

Choosing a Story

News Story Questions

Story Planning

Story Options

Interview Tips

Story Log

Reporter Lesson Log

Interview Tips

Review figurative language

Links

Presentation
Eagle Views News Blog


Make-up Tasks

Sign up for stories. Write/Type Questions (neat); Start appointments

Wiki work on drafts (see story options and story planning-- in resources above)

Share and comment --- feedback teacher and peers on stories

Teams (writers, designers, editors, graphics, proofreader) for proofreading/revising formed.

Confer with teacher for individual lessons on: leads, headlines, pyramid, 5ws, questioning, interview review, passes, strong verbs --- document on CSI sheet


Think and write:

What is your story?
Who will you interview?
What are your questions?
Write how you will ask them to be interviewed.






EALR

1: The student understands and uses a writing process. 1.1.1 Applies more than one strategy for generating ideas and planning writing.
· Generates ideas prior to organizing them * Uses a variety of prewriting strategies
1.2.1 Analyzes task and composes multiple drafts when appropriate a. Refers to prewriting plan.
1.4.1 Edits for conventions (see 3.3).
1.3.1 Revises text, including changing words, sentences, paragraphs, and ideas.Rereads work several times and has a different focus for each reading (e.g., first reading — adding transitions; second reading — deleting unnecessary details; third reading — identifying areas where evidence is lacking and adding relevant information). Evaluates and uses feedback (e.g., “I’ll use the word transformation to improve my word choice.”).

3.1.1 Analyzes ideas, selects a manageable topic, and elaborates using specific, relevant details and/or examples.

3.1.2 Analyzes and selects effective organizational structure. -- organize, lead, end, transitions

3.2.1 Applies understanding that different audiences and purposes affect writer’s voice.

2.1.1 Applies understanding of multiple and varied audiences to write effectively.
2.2.1 Demonstrates understanding of different purposes for writing.


November 3-November 12

Finalize projects:
https://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Election-Project

comparative essays
path to presidency project

Begin:
Veterans Day invitations and displays at http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Veterans-Day


Monday November 3
Spelling Base words:
veteran, soldier, combat, honor, glory, valor, free

Spelling Practice -- all words; spellingcity.com Fantastic Club

Tuesday November 4
Entry: Is there anything in your life worth dying for? Please write 3-5 sentences.

Work on projects: comparative essays, presidential process, Veterans Day (http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Veterans-Day)

Confer with students as needed.

Wednesday November 5
Work on projects; Review essay project with assignment sheet: comparative essays, presidential process, Veterans Day (http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Veterans-Day)

Lesson: Display techniques and presentation for audience

Confer with students as needed.

Thursday November 6
Spelling Tests

Work on projects: comparative essays, presidential process, Veterans Day (http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Veterans-Day)

Confer with students as needed.

Friday November 7

Pow Wow


Monday, November 10: Inservice -- no school
Tuesday, November 11: Veteran’s Day
Wednesday, November 12
Entry: Authority List for Writing -- make a list of writing topics
Spelling: find you own list of frequently misspelled words. Choose five
Power Write

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EALRs

EALR 1: The student understands and uses a writing process.

Component 1.2: Produces draft(s). W
Component 1.3: Revises to improve text. W

Component 1.4: Edits text. W
Component 3.3: Knows and applies appropriate grade level writing conventions. W

EALR 3: The student writes clearly and effectively.
Component 3.1: Develops ideas and organizes writing. W
3.1.1 Analyzes ideas, selects a narrow topic, and elaborates using specific details and/or examples.
· Narrows topic with controlling idea (e.g., from general topic, such as baseball, to specific topic, such as “The Mariners are my favorite baseball team.”).
· Selects details relevant to the topic to extend ideas and develop elaboration (e.g., specific words and phrases, reasons, anecdotes, facts, descriptions, examples).

3.2.2 Analyzes and selects language appropriate for specific audiences and purposes.

2.2.1 Demonstrates understanding of different purposes for writing.
· Writes to pursue a personal interest, to explain, or to persuade.
· Writes to analyze informational and literary texts (e.g., explains the results of a character’s actions; explains the steps in a scientific investigation).
· Writes to learn (e.g., science notebooks, math logs, reading response journal, reflection and self-assessment).

October 27-November 3

Focus:

Ideas: how to think of them; how to add to them
Talking/Writing for IDEAS and DETAILS to ELABORATE

Strong verb paragraph model
Compare/Contrast Model; transitions

Assignment:
Use transitions to write to compare the issues of the two candidates. You may express your opinion and include the comparison of facts to prove your opinion.
Other Assignments: Choices (poster, diagrams, speeches)

Monday October 27
Entry Spelling Base words:
issue, belief, part, campaign, persuade, citizen
Review: Assignment, Venn comparisons, format, strategies for transitions; possible persuasion; rubric;

Intro to Washington Candidates for Governor and District 5 House of Representatives in preparation for Mock Election Voting; Choose and work on projects on issues.

Prewriting: Venn Diagram to compare/contrast candidates

Tuesday 10/28
Entry: Write five spelling words on Weekly Study Sheet
Review: Washington Candidates for Governor and District 5 House of Representatives in preparation for Mock Election Voting

Review: Transitions/Opinions/Comparisons/Format
Prewriting: Venn Diagram for comparison; organizer to prewrite---
Oral models review; written model of sample comparisons.

Assignment:

Use transitions to write to compare the issues of the two candidates. You may express your opinion and include the comparison of facts to prove your opinion.


Wednesday, Oct 29 Entry: Continue similarity paragraphs with partners.
Vote on computer in Mock Election
Introduce Imbee; Read and agree: Wiki Etiquette

If time, discuss contrasting paragraph explaining one candidate. Work with partners to include transitions.

Thursday October 30 Spelling Tests
Continue projects and essays ---

Review goal: comparison paragraphs using transitions:
1) Introduction Sentence
2) Similar Issues
3) Candidate 1 Differences
4) Your favorite candidate differences
5) Concluding Sentence

Graphic Organizer




Thursday October 30 Spelling Tests
Continue essay; if time: other projects



Friday October 31
Entry: Draw a bat

Make a pop-up bat card; write a Halloween greeting:
Sample:
Watch for bats
Dodge the rats
Knock on doors
Say “Please” in fours
For treats galore

Monday November 3

Entry Spelling Base words:
veteran, soldier, combat, honor, glory, valor, free

Work on projects.



Essential Academic Learning Requirements

EALR 1: The student understands and uses a writing process.

Component 1.2: Produces draft(s). W
Component 1.3: Revises to improve text. W

Component 1.4: Edits text. W
Component 3.3: Knows and applies appropriate grade level writing conventions. W

EALR 3: The student writes clearly and effectively.
Component 3.1: Develops ideas and organizes writing. W
3.1.1 Analyzes ideas, selects a narrow topic, and elaborates using specific details and/or examples.
· Narrows topic with controlling idea (e.g., from general topic, such as baseball, to specific topic, such as “The Mariners are my favorite baseball team.”).
· Selects details relevant to the topic to extend ideas and develop elaboration (e.g., specific words and phrases, reasons, anecdotes, facts, descriptions, examples).

3.2.2 Analyzes and selects language appropriate for specific audiences and purposes.

2.2.1 Demonstrates understanding of different purposes for writing.
· Writes to pursue a personal interest, to explain, or to persuade.
· Writes to analyze informational and literary texts (e.g., explains the results of a character’s actions; explains the steps in a scientific investigation).
· Writes to learn (e.g., science notebooks, math logs, reading response journal, reflection and self-assessment).